英語に慣れるための雑作文 その７

雑作文も初めて１週間です。

昨日の間違えた語句が多くて使い切れませんでしたが、思い浮かぶ語句が増えてきたのは素直にうれしいです。


No.8
(A man hold a gun against a woman.)
(He is controled by evil mind.)
A woman(W):Stop. What do you doing? Killing me? Stracking back my father? If kill me, it shall happens nothing.
A man(M):Shall lap! I had fighted against attackers controled by your father, and, killed them. I can't back down!
W:It's nothing! I know you're kindful, and, thinking to kill nobady.
(She go to front of him.)
W:I love you. I love you than another in the world.
(She hold his gun.)
W:Please stop killing.
(He don't push her.)
(She pick off his gun.)
M:I lose. I don't know your like. you're very strong girl.
(He throw up himself hands large.)
W:I'm happy! Very very happy!
(She hug him hardly, and, speedily.)
W:I love you. Please marry me now!


書いたあとの自己採点
×controled ○controlled
×stracking back ○striking back
×Shall lap! ○Shut up!
×kindful ○kindly
×to front of ○in front of
×I love you than another in the world. ○My love for you is stronger than another in the world.
×hardly ○hard
「シャラップ！」は「Shut up!」だったのですね。

使い切れなかった語句
damage

英語に慣れるための雑作文 その６

雑作文を始めて６日目になりました。

書いているときには相変わらず単語が思い浮かびませんが、そのあとで少しずつ思い出すようになりました。


No.7

(A party of hero is fighting the evel king.)

(It's turn of the evel king now.)

(A frontperson of the perty cry to a attaker of the party.)

Frontperson(F):Hide to my back hurly!

Attaker(A):No!

(The attaker take a great sword behind a back of her.)

A:It's my game! I never give up!

(She jump, and, attak the evel king.)

(But, the evel king has stoped her attak by picking her sword.)

The evel king(K):It's nice attak.

(She go back.)

K:I like storong lady. You're just like.

A:Shit! I very very hate you!

K:Oh, my heart has damige of your words.

(He move his hands largely.)

(He take out a flower, present to her.)

K:I love you. Please marry me.


書いたあとの自己採点
×fighting ○fighting against
×evel ○evil
×attaker ○attacker
×hurly ○speedily
×picking ○pick off
×go back ○back down
×storong ○strong
×like ○the like
×damige ○damage
×largely ○large
×move his hand ○throw up himself hands
繰り返し使った単語を間違えていたのは格好悪かったです。

英語に慣れるための雑作文 その５

雑作文も５日目となりました。

動詞、形容詞、副詞の語彙不足だけでなく、副詞の使い分けがさっぱりなことを痛感させられていますが、続けていくうちに少しずつ改善していければと思っています。


No.6
(A pair of lovers are attacked by a monster.)
(A man of lovers stand in front of another.)
Man(M):Hide my back!
(He hold sward for the monster.)
(A woman of lovers go behind him.)
W:Take it easy. We can run away.
(She pick up magic wand, and, speak magic words with small voice.)
W:Get away!
(The monster stop, and, run away.)
(She hold back magic wand speedy.)
W:Grait! It's miracle! You're just hero!
(She hug a back of him.)
M:That's right! I'm grait hero!
W:I love you. Please marry me.


書いたあとの自己採点
×Hide my back! ○Hide to my back!
×sward ○sword
×Take it easy! ○Easy goes it!
×pick up ○take out
×speedy ○speedily
×Grait! ○Great!
昨日と同じ間違いを繰り返したのは良くなかったです。

英語に慣れるための雑作文 その４

昨日までの続きで、３日坊主とならずにすみました。

今日はト書きをちょっと増やそうとしてみたら、表現したい動作や状態を意味する単語がほとんど思い浮かばないことを思い知らされました。雑作文を書くために思い出した単語や文法もありますが、文章を書くにはまだまだ足りないようです。


No,5
(A cupple is walking in a park.)
Woman(W):That's good movie.
Man(M):I think so. Hero is very cool.
W:That's right. Can you become hero?
M:Yes!
(A big dog is running to them.)
W:Help!
M:Behind my back!
(He hold magical stick, and, begin to speak magical words.)
M:Get away!
(The dog jump, and, run away.)
W:It's miracal! You're just hero!
(She hug him.)
M:You're welcome.
W:I love you. Please marry me.


書いたあとの自己採点
×cupple ○a pair of lovers
×Behind my back! ○Hide to my back!
×magical stick ○a magic wand
×magical words ○magic words
×miracal ○miracle
「カップル」というのは英語ではないのでしょうか？　手持ちの辞書を引いても私には単語を見付けられませんでした。

英語に慣れるための雑作文 その３

昨日と一昨日の続きで、雑作文も３日目となりました。

今日は１日目のルールの

• 一人語り

を

• ト書きのついた会話文

に改めて書きました。

少し慣れてきたと思っていたら「marriage」は名詞で動詞は「marry」だと３日目にしてやっと気付いて、まだまだだと実感させられました。


No.4
(A man has helped with a woman.)
Man(M):Thanks.
Woman(W):You are welcome.
(She bigins to walk away.)
M:Wait a minutes!
W:What?
M:I love you.
W:Why? I don't know you, and, you shouldn't know me?
M:But, I love you. It isn't important for me to know you.
W:Do you sleep? I can't understand your thinking.
M:Sorry. But, I don't sleep, and, my head is sharp.
M:It's  important for me to tell you, “You're most beautiful lady in the world. And, I'm most luckiest man in the world.”
M:I love you. Please marry me.


書いたあとの自己採点
×bigins ○begins
綴り間違いは減ったみたいです。