英語に慣れるための雑作文 その７

雑作文も初めて１週間です。

昨日の間違えた語句が多くて使い切れませんでしたが、思い浮かぶ語句が増えてきたのは素直にうれしいです。


No.8
(A man hold a gun against a woman.)
(He is controled by evil mind.)
A woman(W):Stop. What do you doing? Killing me? Stracking back my father? If kill me, it shall happens nothing.
A man(M):Shall lap! I had fighted against attackers controled by your father, and, killed them. I can't back down!
W:It's nothing! I know you're kindful, and, thinking to kill nobady.
(She go to front of him.)
W:I love you. I love you than another in the world.
(She hold his gun.)
W:Please stop killing.
(He don't push her.)
(She pick off his gun.)
M:I lose. I don't know your like. you're very strong girl.
(He throw up himself hands large.)
W:I'm happy! Very very happy!
(She hug him hardly, and, speedily.)
W:I love you. Please marry me now!


書いたあとの自己採点
×controled ○controlled
×stracking back ○striking back
×Shall lap! ○Shut up!
×kindful ○kindly
×to front of ○in front of
×I love you than another in the world. ○My love for you is stronger than another in the world.
×hardly ○hard
「シャラップ！」は「Shut up!」だったのですね。

使い切れなかった語句
damage