英語に慣れるための雑作文 その８

今日は思い浮かんだストーリーを優先して、昨日間違えた語句をすべて使いませんでした。複雑な文を書けるように読むこともした方が良いという気がしてきましたし、そろそろやり方を見直す頃合いなのかもしれません。


No.9
(There is a large living room.)
(A gentleman and a girl is siting against another.)
A gentleman(M):Why do you say, “I'm sorry.” My heart had damage by your words.
(She don't answer, and, look her foots.)
(A view of her is very cute.)
(He stand up, and, hug her hard.)
A girl(G):What! Don't hug me!
(She push him in the his arms. But, she don't push hard.)
M:Is it striking back?
G:Shut up......
(She said with small voice.)
M:Please say, “I'm sorry.”
G:I'm sorry...... You're very kindly.
M:Good. You're very cute girl.
(He put her on floor.)
(She look her foots in front of him.)
M:What happend?
G:Please hug me.
(She open her hands.)
M:OK, my princess.
(He hug her.)
(She tweet near his ear.)
G:I love you. Please marry me.


書いたあとの自己採点
×siting ○sitting
×another ○one another
×do ○don't （否定疑問文）
×view ○scene
×in the his arms ○in his arms
×hands ○arms
今日は思ったより少なくて良かったです。

使わなかった語句
controlled
than