英語に慣れるための雑作文 その17

情景をうまくまとめるのに時間がかかりました。


No.18
In the moon, a beautiful lady is looking down a riverside in the top floor of a high building.
A ship goes past a front of the building.
“My dear, I'll be very busy tomorrow. And, I want to tell you important thing. It's very Important.”
She said to her lovers. He is a adult gentleman who older than her.
“I listen to you. But, I can't listen bad things.”
“Of course. I can't tell you bad things now.”
She goes a front of him, and she hold him soft.
“I love you. Please marry me.”


書いたあとの自己採点
間違いは見付けられませんでした

使わなかった語句

scene

in one's arms

open one's arms

speech of proposal of marriage

aren' t you（付加疑問文）

live

audiences

gather around

propose to

is angry that節

say that節

By the way

call (me) to (here)

indoors

writes A with B
bridge

英語に慣れるための雑作文 その16

やっと再開できました。


No.17
A man is walking on the bigest brige in the city under the moon.
When a black car threws him, its car stops hard.
“Wait!”
A woman shout to him, and she gets off the car fast.
“I had mistaken. I didn't know true love. I'm so sorry. Please listen to me.”
She apologizes him, and she holds his arm.
“It's a past time. You forgets me.”
“No! I love you!”
She hold him hard.
And, he forgives her.
“I understand your heart. I forget a past time.”
“Thank you very much!”
She hold him hard again.
“I love you Please marry me!”


書いたあとの自己採点
×brige ○bridge
×threws ○ran past him

使わなかった語句

scene

in one's arms

open one's arms

speech of proposal of marriage

the (top) floor

aren' t you（付加疑問文）

live

audiences

gather around

propose to

is angry that節

say that節

By the way

call (me) to (here)
riverside
indoors
writes A with B

英語に慣れるための雑作文 その15

書く際のルールの1つを

• ト書きの着いた会話文

から

• 小説形式

に改めました。


No.16
Here is a river side under the blue sky.
A young man will fly a radio controlled airplane.
He is near a young woman who wears a hat, she is angry with him.
“Why did you call me at here? I want to go indoor now.”
“Wait a minute. You shall understand soon.”
“Really? And, hurry up.”
he begins to control the small airplane, and it take off from the river side to another side.
“Look!”
He saies, and it climbs fast.
“What do you happen?”
She asks him, but he doesn't answer.
“Oh, it's great!”
She cries. The airplane writes heart mark by smoke in her sight.
“Plesent to you. I love you. Please marry me.”


書いたあとの自己採点
×river side ○riverside
×indoor ○indoors
×writes (heart mark) by (smoke) ○writes (heart mark) with (smoke)
前置詞の使い分けが難しいです。

使わなかった語句

scene

in one's arms

open one's arms

speech of proposal of marriage

the (top) floor

aren' t you（付加疑問文）

live

listen to

audiences

gather around

propose to
is angry that節
say that節
apologizes
forgives
By the way
call (me) to (here)

英語に慣れるための雑作文 その14

使わなかった語句をできるだけ使うように心がけました。


No.15
(There is a air base in somewhere.)
(In a front of the gate, a young woman is angry to her lover who is late to meeting.)
(Her lover works in the air base.)
(A young man who wears a gray working clothes hurry up to her. He is her lover.)
A young woman(W):Too late!
A young man(M):I'm so sorry! As a pilot said to tarable engine of warplane, I'm too late.
(He sorrys her, and she saies him.)
W:That's a all right. Also, why do you call me here today?
M:I want to present this to you.
(He take a engagement ring out of a pocket in his jacket.)
M:Today is your birthday. I can't be with you today, but I love you. Please marry me.


書いたあとの自己採点
×In (a front of) ○At (a front of)
×is angry to her lover who is late to meeting ○is angry her lover is late for meeting
×hurry up to her ○hurries to the gate
×a pilot said to trable engine of warplane ○a pilot said a engine of the warplane what he got on broke out trouble
×sorrys ○apologizes
×saies ○forgives
×Also ○By the way
×call me here ○call me to here
that節を使うことを忘れていました

使わなかった語句
controlled

scene

in one's arms

open one's arms

speech of proposal of marriage

the (top) floor

is angry with

aren' t you（付加疑問文）

at

live

listen to

audiences

gather around

propose to
take off from A to B

英語に慣れるための雑作文 その13

セリフが1つだけになってしまいました。


No.14
(in the war, there is a airbase in somewhere.)
(Many warplanes take off to battlefield in the airbase everyday.)
(A young pirot who wears a white neckerchief is one of the warplane's crew.)
(He has a lover who grow up together.)
(As she love him, she come meeting him everyday.)
(She wears a gray working cloths, but she is very beautiful.)
(They hug one another like everyday, he get on his warplane what begin to start engine.)
(He shout her.)
A young pirot: I love you! Please marry me as I'll be back!


書いたあとの自己採点
×airbase ○air base
×take off to battlefield in the airbase ○take off from the air base to bttlefield
×pirot ○pilot
×cloths ○clothes
割と間違いが少なくて良かったです。

使わなかった語句

controlled

scene

in one's arms

open one's arms

speech of proposal of marriage

the (top) floor

is angry with

aren' t you（付加疑問文）

pocket

jacket

so sorry

That's a all right
at
live
listen to
audiences
gather around
propose to
明日は減らしたいです。