英語に慣れるための雑作文 その14

使わなかった語句をできるだけ使うように心がけました。


No.15
(There is a air base in somewhere.)
(In a front of the gate, a young woman is angry to her lover who is late to meeting.)
(Her lover works in the air base.)
(A young man who wears a gray working clothes hurry up to her. He is her lover.)
A young woman(W):Too late!
A young man(M):I'm so sorry! As a pilot said to tarable engine of warplane, I'm too late.
(He sorrys her, and she saies him.)
W:That's a all right. Also, why do you call me here today?
M:I want to present this to you.
(He take a engagement ring out of a pocket in his jacket.)
M:Today is your birthday. I can't be with you today, but I love you. Please marry me.


書いたあとの自己採点
×In (a front of) ○At (a front of)
×is angry to her lover who is late to meeting ○is angry her lover is late for meeting
×hurry up to her ○hurries to the gate
×a pilot said to trable engine of warplane ○a pilot said a engine of the warplane what he got on broke out trouble
×sorrys ○apologizes
×saies ○forgives
×Also ○By the way
×call me here ○call me to here
that節を使うことを忘れていました

使わなかった語句
controlled

scene

in one's arms

open one's arms

speech of proposal of marriage

the (top) floor

is angry with

aren' t you（付加疑問文）

at

live

listen to

audiences

gather around

propose to
take off from A to B

英語に慣れるための雑作文 その13

セリフが1つだけになってしまいました。


No.14
(in the war, there is a airbase in somewhere.)
(Many warplanes take off to battlefield in the airbase everyday.)
(A young pirot who wears a white neckerchief is one of the warplane's crew.)
(He has a lover who grow up together.)
(As she love him, she come meeting him everyday.)
(She wears a gray working cloths, but she is very beautiful.)
(They hug one another like everyday, he get on his warplane what begin to start engine.)
(He shout her.)
A young pirot: I love you! Please marry me as I'll be back!


書いたあとの自己採点
×airbase ○air base
×take off to battlefield in the airbase ○take off from the air base to bttlefield
×pirot ○pilot
×cloths ○clothes
割と間違いが少なくて良かったです。

使わなかった語句

controlled

scene

in one's arms

open one's arms

speech of proposal of marriage

the (top) floor

is angry with

aren' t you（付加疑問文）

pocket

jacket

so sorry

That's a all right
at
live
listen to
audiences
gather around
propose to
明日は減らしたいです。

英語に慣れるための雑作文 その12

うまくオチをつけられなくて続きもののような終わり方になってしまいましたが、続きません。


No.13
(There is a house on a bus stop.)
(A young man gets off a bus on the bus stop.)
(His lover is living in the house.)
(He looks down his suits, and , looks up the window of the house. It's the window of her bedroom.)
A young man(M):Please listen my love song for my lover.
(He takes out a guitar, and, sings the song.)
(Many gallary come here as they listen the song.)
(A young woman opens the window what looked by him. She is the lover of him.)
(He stops to sing, and, proposes of marriage with her.)
M:I love you! Please marry me!


書いたあとの自己採点
×gets off a  bus on the bus stop ○gets off a bus at the bus stop
×is living ○lives
×listen my love song ○listen to my love song
×sings ○begins singing
×gallary ○audiences
×come here ○gather around him
×proposes of marriage with her ○propose to her
慣れてきたつもりが間違いだらけでした。

使わなかった語句

controlled

scene

in one's arms

open one's arms

speech of proposal of marriage

the (top) floor

gray
neckerchief
is angry with
aren' t you（付加疑問文）
pocket
jacket
so sorry
That's a all right

英語に慣れるための雑作文 その11

長くしないつもりが、会話部分の勢いで予定より長くなってしまいました。


No.12
(There is a busstop in a street against a ash large building.)
(A young man and a young woman are standing in the busstop.)
(He wears a brown hunting cap, and, she wears a yellow muflar.)
(They are a pairs of lovers. But, she angrys him.)
A young woman(W):You love the girl who enjoyed with you in yesterday, aren't  it?
A young man(M):No! I don't love her! She is a  frend! I love only you! You are more beautiful than another in the world! You are the sun for me! I can't live without you!
(He speak hard for her, and, take a ring out of a poket with his jacet.)
M:This is the engagement ring for marriage with you! I had been helped to buy this with her!
(He present the ring for her.)
W:Oh, my God! I'm very very sorry!
(She hug him hard.)
M:You're welcome. Please listen to me?
W:Yes.
M:I love you. Please marry me.


書いたあとの自己採点
×busstop ○bus stop
×against ○on
×ash ○gray
×muflar ○neckerchief
×angrys ○is angry with
×aren't it ○aren't you.
×poket ○pocket
×jacet ○jacket
×very very sorry ○so sorry
×You're welcome ○That's a all right
英語の「muffler（えり巻き）」が古語だとは初めて知りました。

使わなかった語句

controlled

scene

in one's arms

open one's arms

speech of proposal of marriage

the (top) floor
suits

英語に慣れるための雑作文 その10

雑作文もとうとう10日目です。

ネタ切れになってきてイメージが湧かず、昨日間違えた語句をほとんど使いませんでした。


No.11
(There is a bar in a top floor of a tall bulding.)
(A young gentleman and a beautiful lady are sitting a chair in front of bar counter in the bar.)
(They are a pair of lovers.)
A young gentleman(G):Present for you.
(He take a small box out of his shuit, and, put on counter in front of her.)
A beautiful lady(L):It's me?
G:Yes. Open the box.
(She open the box, and, look at engerge ring in the box.)
L:Oh......, I'm......very very happy.
(They look at one another.)
G:I love you. Please marry me.


書いたあとの自己採点
×a top floor ○the top floor
×bulding ○building
×shuit ○suits
×engerge ring ○engagement ring
階を意味するときは「the」のようですね。

使わなかった語句

controlled

scene

in one's arms

open one's arms

hunting cap
speech of proposal of marriage
than